Is the timing correct on this one?

I would love it if somebody would work on a solo. 

This video is special to me since Anul is deployed in Afganistan right now. This is one of the better recordings we had that day, not perfect though, but I still like it. He has a great passion for music. Be safe Anul.

I make a mistake in the end and it all falls apart, but sounds pretty good till then. Spencer improved both the lead and the song while we were recording it. Pretty cool.